Okay, here’s the rewritten passage with improved English grammar and syntax, while retaining the original personal pronouns and xianxia novel style:

**Chapter 11: Assessment**

“Divine Lord,” the portly official began, “the abodes we in Huoyang City have prepared for the Eternal True Gods are all located in the ring zone closest to the Chaos Ruins. It is there that the perception of the Laws of Chaos is most clear.”

The reason large cities attract Eternal True Gods is precisely because of the Chaos Ruins; being near them allows for the clearest sensing of the Laws of Chaos! Naturally, Eternal True Gods are willing to reside here.

Furthermore, the Chaos Ruins condense vast quantities of Chaos Crystals and Chaos Stones.

The Chaos Crystals and Chaos Stones of the Origin Continent all originate from these Chaos Ruins.

“Divine Lord, please observe, there are tens of thousands of grotto-mansions to choose from within the ring zone of the Chaos Ruins,” the portly official said. Within the main hall, a holographic model of Huoyang City appeared, with numerous grotto-mansions in the ring zone clearly marked.

“If you find one grotto-mansion to be too small, you can even purchase several and combine them to form a colossal grotto-mansion,” the portly official chuckled. “Many of Huoyang City’s great clans have purchased grotto-mansions here.”

“This one will suffice.” Luo Feng selected a relatively small grotto-mansion. He could see all of its data and information at a glance.

This grotto-mansion was 200,000 kilometers in both length and width. Inside, there was a modest mountain 128,000 kilometers high, as well as some delicate lakes and rivers. There were also over a thousand pavilions and halls. Beneath the grotto-mansion was a vast underground palace.

The underground palace was 100,000 kilometers in both length and width, riddled with mechanisms and layered arrays, clearly a place for secluded cultivation.

“This grotto-mansion is rather small. When an Eternal True God reveals their true form to cultivate secret techniques, they may find it a bit cramped,” the portly official cautioned.

“It’s enough, quite enough.” Luo Feng smiled.

Eternal True Gods *do* require ample space when revealing their true forms to cultivate secret techniques.

But he could control the size of his divine body at will. Small-scale cultivation had no impact. If he were to fully expand? Then even the largest grotto-mansion would seem small.

“The purchase fee for this ‘Chaos Armor 913’ grotto-mansion is 500 Universe Sand,” the thinner official stated.

Luo Feng immediately waved his hand, and a full 500 Universe Sand floated into existence on one side. The reason he chose a smaller grotto-mansion was because the Universe Sand left behind by Hedo Mo was relatively limited.

He couldn’t afford a larger grotto-mansion!

Of course, he could change his size at will, and it was only himself and Molosa living here; there was no need for it to be too large.

“May I ask the Divine Lord for your esteemed name?” the thinner official continued.

“Lohe,” Luo Feng said. To prevent Ancestral God Purple Moon from leaking his information, Luo Feng naturally had to use a false name.

“All information has been duly recorded.” The thinner official then handed Luo Feng a talisman. “From this moment forward, this ‘Chaos Armor 913’ grotto-mansion belongs to the Divine Lord.”

“Good.” Luo Feng accepted the talisman with satisfaction, then turned and departed with Molosa and Mo Yu Tiger.

The two officials respectfully saw the Eternal True God to the entrance of the main hall, watching as they flew away.

“Quickly report to the City Lord’s Manor!” the portly official urged.

“Eternal True Gods who openly purchase residences like this generally don’t harbor malicious intent,” the thinner official said, while simultaneously submitting the detailed information.

…

After flying out of the Chaos Hall,

“Mo Yu Tiger, you have worked hard these past few days, helping us to find our way around. If you encounter any trouble in the future, you can send a message to me,” Luo Feng said with a smile to Mo Yu Tiger, simultaneously giving him a communication mark.

Mo Yu Tiger was both surprised and delighted. “It is my honor to serve the esteemed one.” He recorded the communication mark, immediately sending a message to Luo Feng, thereby giving Luo Feng his contact information as well.

This kind of ordinary communication talisman had a limited range, only slightly larger than Huoyang City.

Luo Feng smiled slightly. Although the other party was only a Void True God, he had at least served him for several days. Luo Feng never liked taking advantage of others.

“Kid, maybe we will meet again.” Molosa also laughed, and then left with Luo Feng.

Mo Yu Tiger watched the two figures fly away, secretly sighing, “I, Mo Yu Tiger, am truly fortunate to have encountered such a benevolent superior! He didn’t kill me, didn’t steal my treasures. Just for helping with directions, he even offered me the chance to ask for help. The difference between Eternal True Gods is truly vast.”

Mo Yu Tiger secretly sighed, then steered his flying boat toward his home. “I will go home and see if those three little brats have caused any trouble.”

Thinking of his three children, Mo Yu Tiger felt content.

Returning home with treasures, the fate of his three children would also be changed.

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Having seen the huge model of Huoyang City when purchasing the grotto-mansion, Luo Feng and the others already knew the exact location of the grotto-mansion, so they flew there directly.

“Master, you are called Lohe, so what am I called?” Molosa transmitted mentally.

“You’ll be called Rosa!” Luo Feng transmitted mentally.

“Alright!” Molosa nodded.

The Chaos Hall was not far from the Chaos Ruins. After flying for a short while, Luo Feng and the two of them arrived in front of the grotto-mansion.

“We’re here.” Luo Feng looked at the grotto-mansion in front of him, he could see the beautiful mountain range more than 100,000 kilometers high, with lakes and waterfalls on the mountain. A grotto-mansion with a length and width of 200,000 kilometers was indeed considered relatively small for an Eternal True God.

Luo Feng held the talisman and easily refined it.

Buzz~~~

The secret patterns engraved in the underground palace of the grotto-mansion lit up, and suddenly formations appeared, changing and combining, drawing in a dense mist of world energy, obscuring the entire grotto-mansion with clouds.

“The power of this formation is not small. Even if an Eternal True God wants to force their way in, it will take some time,” Luo Feng said with satisfaction.

“It sells for 500 Universe Sand, how could the formation be bad?” Molosa couldn’t help but say, his pocket money was only a hundred or so Universe Sand.

“What they’re selling is the geographical location! The location near the Chaos Ruins! The formation is given away for free.” After Luo Feng refined the entire grotto-mansion formation, he condensed a talisman with his divine power and handed it to Molosa. “This talisman is for you. With it, you can freely enter and exit the grotto-mansion.” Molosa accepted it. “Let’s take a good look at this grotto-mansion.”

Whoosh!

Luo Feng and Molosa entered through the main entrance of the grotto-mansion, leisurely strolling through it. With their speed of flight, they naturally flew from one end of the grotto-mansion to the other in the blink of an eye, quickly completing the tour.

The master and servant came to the top of the mountain and drank wine together to celebrate.

“From now on, we will temporarily reside in Huoyang City,” Luo Feng said with a smile as he drank.

“The first residence after arriving in the Origin Continent,” Molosa also liked this grotto-mansion very much.

Luo Feng glanced around and said, “You can choose any one of the thousand or so buildings in this grotto-mansion to live in, and the main building is mine.”

Molosa drank the delicious wine contentedly. This was the fine wine he had brought from the primitive universe, and every drop he drank was one drop less. He looked down below and nodded. “Then I will choose the sub-building not far from the main building. I have to protect my master.”

“Hahaha, relying on your protection.” Luo Feng said, also sensing the Laws of Chaos.

Rumbling~~~

It was too close, right next to his own grotto-mansion, the Laws of Chaos were actively manifesting! He could even see with his naked eyes the materialized Laws of Chaos manifested by the adjacent ‘Chaos Ruins’.

“When I first came to the Origin Continent, I felt that the Laws of Chaos were very clear,” Luo Feng thought, ‘Now living next to the ‘Chaos Ruins’, it’s like watching the manifestation of laws up close!”

!。

The cultivation environment here was much better than in the primitive universe.

Accustomed to the extremely blurred environment of the primitive universe, Luo Feng was so moved that he almost shed tears.

“With such an environment, I don’t need any treasures, I just need time to comprehend, and I will definitely comprehend the Laws of Chaos,” Luo Feng was very confident.

Under such an environment to comprehend the ‘Laws of Chaos’, the difficulty was definitely not as great as comprehending the ‘Source of Laws’ in the primitive universe.

“Master… huh?”

Molosa was originally drinking wine and chatting with Luo Feng, but suddenly, Luo Feng sat there and entered a state of cultivation.

“He’s starting to cultivate already?”

Molosa blinked his eyes, he glanced at the Chaos Ruins next door, “I don’t feel anything about this so-called Chaos Ruins.”

He was born from the Great Dao of Destruction, as long as he ate and drank, and had enough time and energy to grow, he could reach the peak. Naturally, he couldn’t understand Luo Feng’s current emotion.

“Master has to work hard to cultivate. If he is strong enough, he will be able to protect me in the future,” Molosa thought. As soon as he thought of so many World Beasts born in the history of the three thousand primitive universes, only the World Beast of Tianmu Nation survived, Molosa felt a lot of pressure.

…

At this moment, inside the super-large grotto-mansion of Chaos Armor 3, this grotto-mansion belonged to the Molim family.

“Hmm?” A middle-aged man with four purple curved horns growing from his head, ‘Moli Meng’, was looking at a piece of information that appeared in front of him. “A strange Eternal True God has come to Huoyang City and purchased the ‘Chaos Armor 913’ grotto-mansion, his name is Lohe?”

“Apart from this, there is no record of any information about him.” Moli Meng guessed, “Is he a newly promoted Eternal True God? Or was he sent by a foreign force?”

As a prosperous trading city on the border, Huoyang City was indeed a mixed bag, and Moli Meng dared not be careless about any information about Eternal True Gods.

“Father, father.” A heavily armored, strong woman strode in.

“Feiyun.” Moli Meng looked at his daughter with a smile, “Are you back from hunting?”

Moli Feiyun said, “Hunting is a trivial matter, Father. When I returned to Huoyang City, I discovered a strange Eternal True God who was not in the information you gave me. He has black hair and a pair of dark golden pointed horns…”

“Is it him?” Moli Meng retrieved the information from just now.

Moli Feiyun looked at the various information on the intelligence report and nodded, “Yes, it’s him, his name turned out to be Lohe? The City Lord’s Mansion’s assessment of his strength is grade D, so low?”

The City Lord’s Mansion paid attention to every Eternal True God, collected all relevant information, and gave a strength rating, from high to low were four levels: A, B, C, and D.

This kind of information would be notified to high-level core members as soon as possible.

As one of the high-level members of Huoyang City, Moli Meng had mastered most of the secrets of Huoyang City! Of course, those Eternal True Gods who harbored hostility and deliberately lurked in were not so easy to find.

“The authorities don’t have any information about his past, so he is temporarily rated as D,” Moli Meng said.

“The entire Yu Nation’s authorities don’t have any information about his past?” Moli Feiyun was surprised.

“No.”

Moli Meng said, “Since he openly bought a grotto-mansion, he should not be hostile. Maybe he is really a newly promoted Eternal True God. This kind of newly promoted Eternal True God has not experienced a lot of tempering, and his strength is generally not too strong. Maybe he is only at the third or fourth level of Eternal True God, so it is reasonable to temporarily set him as a D grade.”

“However, even if it is a D grade, you should stay away from him,” Moli Meng reminded his daughter.

“I understand.” Moli Feiyun immediately responded obediently.

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Thank you to the newly added leaders, namely——

Silver League: Gun Demon Xu Jingming (this is the protagonist of my previous novel!)

All League Masters: Turquoise Caviar, San Geng Banyue, Xu Xin Venerable (this name is cooler)